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World Seed

by Viken
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Kolan Mist is a 26 year old overweight man who’d much rather be a cave troll, locked in his room with his computer than out and about mixing with the rest of humanity. Sadly life, and his mothers new fiance, have forced him to abandon his life of relative indulgence and has forced him to get a job.

The one place he’d managed to get work at is a hellhole of a store franchise known as Minut Mart, where he works as a cashier for little more than minimal wage. He has managed to move out on his own however, and daydreams of burning down the cursed place after handing in his two week notice.

But things take a weird turn when a mysterious blue box and a message pops up in front of every person on the planet, talking about something called the World Seed. Then the world is literally turned on its head as the new overlords of the Earth, called the Collectors, started tinkering with the world for their own amusement.

Monsters, aliens, mutants and zombies suddenly appear and attack the still confused human race. The destruction is epic. But the powers and abilities gained by the survivors are even more so.

How will Kolan Mist survive in a world that seems to come straight out of a great many of his favorite stories? Just what will he do on the search for the World Seed? And what secrets will he uncover about the multiverse beyond human imagination?

Even he isn’t sure. especially if he cannot survive in this new world!

NOTE: This is my third story here, and while I think I may find some great inspiration in writing it, my real life circumstances make that unlikely for the near future. Chapters will be posted as I get them written however, along with my other two works: Master of Dungeons and Universe Online.

I hope you enjoy it, however!

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Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 – The Update 5 years ago
Chapter 2 – Lairs and Curses 5 years ago
Chapter 3 – Crazy World 5 years ago
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Woot! A start of a GREAT Novel.

Overall: 5/5, Woohoo! concept isn’t original but the way you show the story is undoubtedly, at professional level. Will expect more, and will be Following, Rating, Recommending your Story, Also, I’m giving you 5/5, as for having a realistic approach regarding your story, since it is basically what i love the most. not the “WTF, oh my god, it happened because it happened, fuck you it’s because of MAGIC!” type of writing, which makes me want to hurl reading their novels despite their efforts, but i don’t hate them.

Expecting more chapters in the future. I will give advance review despite small chapters, since i can see the potential of this novel.

Style: 5/5, great use of words and metaphors, easy to understand and easy to read.

Story: 3.5/5, since i haven’t seen the whole story so giving average score for now. but i know that it would probably turn into 5/5, given the time.

Grammar: 5/5, no flaws what so ever. (that i can see)

Character: 5/5. i can see the bright future regarding the MC’s development. and i think he would probably go to the “Anti-hero” type or “Villainy” type of character. but that’s just me. πŸ™‚

Absolutely Beautiful.

First off, I have great love for your writing. It is just beautiful. I love the way the stories unfold, and how the characters come together.

-The story is just fantastic, and I don’t usually give ratings but this needs it so others can get a better understanding of its true quality.

-Your style is so unique to you and it flows to smoothly, the way you right just fits together like a perfectly sized up puzzle. People sometimes say that most things are similar to others, but your style just flows a lot easier than others too me, Sometimes I have to think about what I am reading, but with yours it has great insight and is easy to get.

-Its only 4/5 because it is only JUST started, But it is probably a 5/5, But to avoid harsh criticism of others based of stereotypical accusations I did 4/5 so as to not hurt the public opinion of reviewing. But the story is amazing, I love the struggle and the growth in it. The cynical attitude is quite nice from the Controllers aspect, it cracks me up when I read what they put in front of the MC.

-I’m absolutely amazed I have not seen errors in your writing, cause usually there’s just a few errors, but not with this. I have read many stories, and am a Programmer, so when it comes to spotting errors, I am like a ninja, I know them the second I see them. But your stories are well thought and well initiated. Too me you seem like your very, very thorough in your proofreading, of you’ve just gotten very good at prevent mistakes from happening, but I digress, It is simply wonderful.

-The MC, or Kolan, has a wonderful way to grow based on what I have read. He has a great attitude, not positive, but not absolutely negative. I love his true cynicism towards everything happening, and how well it’s executed. His ideas and thoughts come through perfectly, and he behaves like a normal human would. I also like how he isn’t a ‘Sad Case’ in life (Similar to Universe Online), or has had it all. It is very refreshing to see the MC as a normal person, or just under/above average, who deals with the struggles.

I am kind of new to Reviewing, but I didn’t feel a normal review would cut it for this story. Thank you Viken for making my day better, I just wish I could read more. πŸ™‚

Kolan Mist is a 26 year old overweight man who'd much rather be a cave troll, locked in his room with his computer than out and about mixing with the rest (…)

World Seed

by FelRhyn

Aerwyn’s journey begins when he wakes up next to a peculiar looking spear in an empty field. His memories are missing, and although there are no wounds, his body feels broken. Who is he? How did he get there? And why does everything he kills come back to life? Join Aerwyn as he learns more about his necromancer-like powers and explores a vivid world filled with unique fantasy creatures. In the world of Alduun, personal power is limited. While still being powerful foes, a mage/warrior cannot blow away an entire army with a single move. In World Seed, there will be a more significant focus on politics, military tactics, and army building as Aerwyn carves his empire into the world of Alduun and beyond.

Discord: https://discord.gg/zpPmqQq Map updates will be posted here from now on as it’ll make life easier for everyone.

Schedule: 1 Chapter a day at minimum. Usually aiming for 10+ a week. Length: 1500-2000 words.

Reviews are immensely appreciated.

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Reading novel World Seed written by FelRhyn, rating: 4.7, category: Fantasy. Aerwyn's journey begins when he wakes up next to a peculiar looking spear in an empty field. His memories are missing, and although there are no wounds, his body feels broken. Who is he? How did he get there? And why does everything he kills come back to life? Join Aerwyn as he learns more about his necromancer-like powers and explores a vivid world filled with unique fantasy creatures. In the world of Alduun, personal power is limited. While still being powerful foes, a mage/warrior cannot blow away an entire army with a single move. In World Seed, there will be a more significant focus on politics, military tactics, and army building as Aerwyn carves his empire into the world of Alduun and beyond. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Discord: https://discord.gg/zpPmqQq Map updates will be posted here from now on as it'll make life easier for everyone. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Schedule: 1 Chapter a day at minimum. Usually aiming for 10+ a week. Length: 1500-2000 words. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Reviews are immensely appreciated!!!